You have recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: describe the problem with the equipment explain what happened when you phoned the shop say what you would like the manager to do

Dear Sir/Maam, I am writing

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letter regarding the electric heater that I purchased in your home kitchenware store

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Saturday in Robinson’s Manila, on the 25th of December. Let me explain my situation in more detail when at the store it looks seems fine but I found out that it is not functioning well when I am about to try it.

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, I saw a small crack in the button part. I phoned your store to informed you about the damage and I returned it back on the following day but ,

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there is no available item to replace it.

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, they told me to wait for 3 days for the replacement and until now I am not getting any response from your staff. I would suggest and be most grateful if you could give me a full refund if you cannot replace it

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week. Please look into the matter at your earliest convenience. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Peter John

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Oct 16, 2021

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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172 words

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