Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is this a negative or positive development?

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present,

children

are unnecessarily influenced by their

parents

for them to become

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successful

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. I believe that the reason behind

this

is the

parents

have too

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hopes

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on

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their

children

's having a better future.

This

will lead to negative consequences,

as a result

of the

children

become overwhelmed by competing with their peers. It is argued that the

parents

get involved in their

children

's education by making them more

robbatic

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acrobatic

robotic

.

This

is because

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the current school teaching systems are very complex and more competitive among

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colleagues. In order to obtain good grades for the school exams, many youngers opt for

spoon feeding

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with getting much guidance with their tuition masters.

For example

, in India, a lot of students in primary school give up some optional subjects due to the

hactic

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hectic

study workload. From my point of view, the pupils should have

fewer

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time to do their leisure time activities to get their

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relaxed.

On the other hand

, young people get more stressed being competing with their fellow students. In order to obtain

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higher results, the

children

solely depend on their teachers, make them less

indipendent

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independent

and selfish.

For instance

, in Pakistan, many

adolescent

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suffer from anxiety and depression due to

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up with the complex and wide variety of educational

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syllabus. I believe that there is a huge possibility that the students would not be able to reach their future goals due to their families unbearable pressure. In conclusion, the behaviour of

parents

make

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children

more robotic and vulnerable. In order to deal with educational competition which is created by the society leads to the negative consequences of the

children

's being over stress.