Should education and healthcare be free of charge and funded by the government, or should it be the responsibility of the people to pay for these services? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Opinions are divided as to whether the governments should be a crucial part in allowing education and health care for free. Despite the fact that there are some benefits if individuals are charged, I believe that

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idea brings about much more benefits. There are some reasons why I argue against that

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should pay for access

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opportunities.

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, the

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could encourage impoverished children who want to go

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education but lack

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apply

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fundings

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, leading kids to become skilled employees in the future which could improve the economic system in long term.

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, in Germany, everyone has been allowed to study for free by

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,

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, these educated

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have played a vital part to develop the nation.

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, if there was no fee

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medical treatment ,residents would be able to approach

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wherever they are since every hospital was supported by the

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.

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, it does not mean that individuals should not pay anything to approach these facilities. Since the

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have to invest

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in a variety of sectors

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as government offices, public transports or even care houses for elderly

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, dwellers should invest their money

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educational and medical fields as well.

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will lead many institutions and healthcare workers to be encouraged by lots of money.

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, private schools have been known that there are more equipment and opportunities to facilitate their students as they

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higher

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than public schools. In doing so, not only gain benefits to everyone but governments

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earn advantages as well In conclusion, I can understand why some

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hold the idea that everyone should pay for education and healthcare, but it seems to me that it would be more advantages of the

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take there to be unchanged,