The higher proportion of older population will over take younger generation what is the reason? is it positive or negative development?

The diagram illustrates the process of making chocolates. Overall, there are ten stages in the process and it starts with selecting the right pods and ends with converting the solid chocolate structure into liquid form. At the beginning of the cycle, they initiate
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the basic process of collecting the ripe red pods from the cocoa tree. After
pod
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harvesting stage, they break the shell to get the
whilte
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white
whole
cocoa
beans
. After that, the
beans
are fermented and at
this
stage, they catch moisture. Now, in order to kill the moisture, they spread them onto a plane surface and uses sunlight to make them dry. Following
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, the
beans
are put into the large sacks for delivery and they use train or lorry to take them to
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. In the subsequent stage, the received
beans
are roasted at 360
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.
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, to remove the shell a bean crusher is used to crush the
beans
and
finally
, to get the chocolates in liquid consistency, they press the inner part, which is obtained after removing the shells.
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