The rising levels of traffic congestion in many big cities around the world con cause the decline in quality of life in cities. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve them?

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traffic

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congestion

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is an

inecapable

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condition in large and

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growing

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across the world. Over recent years,

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problem

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has become one of the most pressing issues because it has profoundly affected the lives of individuals

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in many big

citites

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cities

. The following paragraphs will examine the causes of

traffic

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congestion

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and recommend some solutions.

Traffic

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congestion

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is caused by many reasons. One of the major reasons is the rising

number

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of vehicles on roads being caused by the higher

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of population and the

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economy.

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, with the economic development in big cities, a lot of

people

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from rural

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move to cities, and many of them, including urban

people

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, want their own personal transport to help them commute conveniently. As the

number

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of cars rises, the chance of

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increases. Another reason is that public transportation facilities in some cities

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as Bangkok and Manila are inadequate and poorly managed.

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,

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choose to drive their own cars. To tackle

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problem

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, there are several things that the

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goverment

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government

can do.

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, the state

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goverment

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government

should provide convenient, safe and clean public transport facilities in order to

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encourage

people

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to leave their cars at

homes

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and use public transports

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.

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, roads and highways should be expanded to support the increasing

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of vehicles. In

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, the

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goverment

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government

could promote carpool and provide bicycle lanes which can bring a lot of benefits to the

people

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and the city in

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of reducing

traffic

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and pollution.

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, the

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goverment

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government

should develop new industrial and commercial

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outside the city so that

people

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could move to these

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areas

gears

.

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can help reduce the density

problem

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in metropolitan

areas

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.

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,

traffic

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congestion

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is mainly caused by a dramatic rise of the care users and poor public

transportaion

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transportation

. The

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goverment

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government

and

public

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should cooperate to solve

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problem

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in a long term by reducing

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number

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of vehicles and using more public transport.