While your friend was away on vacation, you stayed in his apartment. While you were there, you dropped an expensive bowl and broke it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, - explain what happened - apologise for the accident - tell your friend what you plan to do about the bowl

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Dear Jason, How are you and how was your holiday? I hope you had an amazing time and came back fresh. Thanks for letting me stay at your place. I enjoyed playing Playstation games and had fun trying the skateboard. I have unpleasant news for you actually. After a few days of ordering both meals from the neighbourhood shops, I got sick of outside food. I decided to try cooking a simple soup

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cooking is new for me. After pouring the boiling hot soup into a navy blue bowl, it slipped out of my hands while I was carrying it over to the dining table and crushed into pieces ,unfortunately. The broken chinaware seemed to be of good quality and looked expensive with the detailed design painted around it. I am so sorry to have broken it. I feel really apologetic towards you as it happened during my stay in your apartment. Since

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, I had been looking for

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a bowl, and I found a similar type yesterday at a high-end shopping mall. I bought two of them in the same navy blue colour and arranged a doorstep delivery to your flat. I hope that

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would make you feel a bit better. Please let me know if you like them after you have received them. Kind regards, Mike

WaiMon Oct 18 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

221 words

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