Every country should have a free health service; even if that means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through this service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.
These days, online classes are increasingly popular among teachers and students. In my opinion,
this
trend will continue to grow more in the future. This
will happen for various reasons the first
of which is the cost. Distance - learning is considered to be more affordable for people who work full time whilst studying. On the other hand
, online classes make it harder to assess some type of student feedback and information. Teachers can help individual students therefore
; they don’t feel isolated. And Add the comma(s)
,therefore
also
, traditional classrooms give students a sense of unity, inspiration and challenge. In conclusion, due to their cost and their availability for everyone, online classes will replace traditional ones in the future.Submitted by hesam.masoud.ielts on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite