Only government action can solve housing shortages in big cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the economic development, an increasing number of population flooding into big cities to pursue their dreams. A large number of them are suffering from housing scarcity due to the ever-accelerated housing price. Some believe that

this

problem can be only solved by

government

interruptions. To my mind, authority plays a role in tackle

this

problem, while there are still other alternatives that can be applied.

First

, The real estate developers should transform their strategies by building more economically affordable houses rather than the luxurious villa which is out of

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community’s financial ability. By doing so, a majority of folk could afford the expenditure on houses with the help of banks or make use of the

government

policies. Another effective way is that people should abandon their traditional thinking believing that

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property is the only symbol of success or home. The mass media have the duty to alter the public’s mode of thinking. If people cannot own their property in a short time, renting a

house

for a short time to raise money for the future

house

investment could

also

be a plausible solution. Indeed,

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government

can serve as a deterrent in restraining those real estate developers from inflating the

house

price as their wishes.

However

, a large proportion of citizens in big cities are still experiencing home scarcity due to the inequity of wealth allocation. The wealthy group or speculators still have access to buy a

house

prior to those common

house

buyers. only when

house

speculations

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limited can

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ordinary people have an opportunity to pay

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house

. To conclude, I believe that it is superficial to draw a conclusion that the

house

shortages can be solved rely solely on

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government

policies. Actually,

house

developers,

government

, and the public should

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joint

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effort on

this

issue.