Only government action can solve housing shortages in big cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Housing scarcity is thorny a social issue every

government

needs to resolve. After all, over-high housing price exerts a detrimental influence on people’s happiness index. Some people argue that only the

government

can relieve the pressure of housing

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the most supreme governmental administration. Personally speaking, governments do have a vital role to play in stabilizing the housing price, but there are still other means to tackle

this

severe problem. Indeed, I have to concede that governments can， in more ways than one， restrain the ever-accelerated cost of new

houses

. One of the most effective ways to control

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the expenditure of the

house

is to deter the greedy speculators or property developers from flipping homes, more precisely， the vacancy rate could be greatly reduced when governmental interruption works.

Moreover

, governments are supposed to strengthen the supervision over real estate developers so that it helps to stop those illicit merchants from disrupting the regular economic orders.

However

, the effort made by home buyers and builders is indispensable. As far as wealthy

house

purchaser who desires to earn high interests in housing investment concerned, they should learn to eliminate their avarice for an enormous

house

. The rich had better assume the responsibility to set a fine example for society. In

this

way, the public will learn that housing investment is not the only worthwhile way to allocate wealth. In the meanwhile, ordinary buyers not only ought to work diligently to raise money for future

house

investment

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but

also

make full use of the

government

policies and bank loans to promote the standard of living.

Furthermore

, the builders’ efforts cannot be ignored.

Firstly

, they ought to transfer their housing strategy from building luxurious villas to popularizing economically affordable

houses

. Only when cheaper

houses

are built by property

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can they meet the demands of common

house

consumers.

Similarly

, mass media have the duty to alter people’s mode of thinking in

house

via encouraging people to rent

houses

if they cannot own their property in

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time. In closing, I reaffirm my conviction that it is rather superficial to simply say that only

government

can address the housing shortage problem. Concerted efforts should be made by

house

buyers and builders.