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As computers translate quickly and accurately ,learning foreign languages is a waste of time ? To what extend do you agree or disagree

#computers #languages #waste #time
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Learning a foreign
language
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 may be unnecessary after we found
translators
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. Most people think
translators
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 will eradicate learning
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 I am completely against the idea of
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 can replace the place
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 of learning. The computer
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 can not do their job
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 as linguistics Even 21st century all the translation programs can'
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 do their jobs accurately.they aren'
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 able to translate complicated and formal languages.Even in slang
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,They are always confused and didn'
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 know. Is it true or not. Due to exploring in the university of
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 in Molodesia.They found it,linguistics is 1000 times better than translator machines.They can'
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 translate idioms or as I said jargon,formal etc which is related to
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 part of the
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.As well as humans can learn quicker than machines.If you want to make a perfect translator you had to dedicate your all life to it even
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 isn'
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 sufficient for an accurate machine translator. Learning a
language
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 has a lot of opportunities and you can earn a lot of things in that way.
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,If machines take away learning languages people can'
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 find a job in the linguistic field.
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 learning
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 improve your brain skills and do many wrinkles in your brain Eventually,using machine
translators
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 was the worst and harmful way for humanity
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
  • Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
  • Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
  • Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
  • Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
  • Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
  • Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities
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