Many companies and other organizations require employees to wear a uniform. For which jobs do you think a uniform is a good thing? What are the disadvantages of having to wear a uniform at work?

Over the recent years, the trend of wearing
uniform
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at
workplace
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has declined;
still
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there are a few establishments
which
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mandate the use of them. I believe, uniforms are more suitable for
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of jobs where
field work
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is not involved because similar dressing helps in identifying their belonging. There a
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few downsides to
this
as well which we shall discuss below with relevant examples.
To begin
with, common clothing demotes bringing out an
individuals
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real personality or true self. People used to wear uniforms during the industrial revolution when they worked in manufacturing units and plants. Nowadays, due to the economic shift towards
service
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industry; the in-demand jobs are those where client servicing and customer interaction holds more importance. It becomes very difficult for the customers' to remember or differentiate a person from another due to similar
clothings
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,
hence
it is best to avoid
the
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confusion.
On the other hand
, wearing a tidy and expensive suit does not speak about the persons' position in the company which
uniform
might.
For example
, a high ranking official in the army gets distinguished and
indentified
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identified
basis his
uniform
. Not having a
uniform
can act as a threat since anyone can
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to be someone they are not and misuse the power and position.
For instance
, in the Pulwama attacks in Kashmir, terrorists dressed as soldiers to infiltrate the military camp and succeeded in killing many army personnel.
Moreover
, it should be avoided to avert any
such
future crisis. To summarize, though there might be a few benefits of honing a
uniform
; there are many drawbacks of having to wear them and their use should be limited to a few mechanical or hospitality
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.
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