Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
In today's society, people have been struggling with lots of problems, particularly
in
sleep deprivation. There are various factors that can cause Change preposition
apply
this
issue and a variety of measures can take a step to solve it effectively.
There are two main causes which
can lead everyone to be tough in order to sleep. The Correct pronoun usage
that
first
contributing factor is that the population tends to hold the
high level of stress coming back to their homes since they cannot let their hair down and be relaxed. Correct article usage
a
For example
, The increasing rate of working men who have not gotten enough sleep can be seen more and more, especially those who have lots of burden
and high positions in the workplace. Fix the agreement mistake
burdens
This
leads them would not be
able to sleep straight away when their heads Fix the infinitive
to be
put
on the pillows. Another factor is that nowadays dwellers of all ages have a tendency to spend too much time on the screens or consoles which can cause either physical health or mental health that could negatively impact Add a missing verb
are put
that
brains to not be able to get a rest.
Change the word
their
However
, there are diverse ways that individuals can apply to address the problems. Firstly
, they should reduce the time spending
on their technological devices and find recreational activities to get a healthy body and positive mentality. Wrong verb form
spent
As a result
, their body systems could work efficiently, which leads them to be easy in terms of sleep deeply. Secondly
, trying to find relaxing ways to be unwind
can positively affect their brains to decrease high strain, regardless of how much work they have. Change the verb form
unwind
For example
, if employees have a heavy workload but they can control the work life
balance, they Add a hyphen
work-life
consequently
would be fresh and not try hard to sleep.
In conclusion, the lack of getting enough rest caused by tension
of workers and spending too much time on screens can be addressed by various solutions.Add an article
the tension
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