You wish to apply for a new college course, but you are unsure about the details of cost, duration and subjects posted on the college website. Write an email to the relevant person in admissions at the college, asking them to clarify these points for you. In this email, Say what your interest is Explain why the website is unclear Request the information that you need Begin your letter ‘Dear --------’

Dear Samantha, I am interested in taking the orbital mechanics course for
this
semester. It will be extremely beneficial for me, as I am planning to work in the space engineering field. I am trying to find some useful information about the course enrollment on the university website, but I could not find any. The website has multiple taps that
offers
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lots of services,
however
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I cannot find the piece of information I am looking for.
Moreover
, the search bar is not working. I was
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wandering
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what could be the cost of the orbital
mechanics
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course
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and its duration. Please let me know If you can help me
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those questions.
Also
, can you please tell me where I can find the subjects offered for students in the college? Thank you for your time, and I look forward to receiving the information required Kind Regards, Ahmed Moter
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