Are men naturally more competitive than women? To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions are divided as to whether males typically compete with each other more than females. In my opinion, I strongly disagree that males have higher competition than women.
There is the main reason why I argue that more men simply have high common trend that almost every man tend to be stand out distinctly. There are a variety of fights that have been
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For example
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as boxing, peaching, risky activities and so on. which are considered as a competition of physical stamina. It is so since they want to be strenghten
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society would think that the competitive situation between men and women is very different.
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