Many people believe that the government should encourage industries and businesses to move from large cities to the countryside. Do you think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, many people believe that government should enhance factories and companies in big

city

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relocate to rural areas. In my

points

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of view,

this

idea has more benefits and is can overcome

nagative

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negative

aspects. There are considerable merits to locating companies in

regional

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a regional

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area

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areas

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. The foremost advantage is that factories can

declline

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decline

expenditure. People

especialy

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especially

worker

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workers

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can reduce

ther

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their

the

living expenses by existing in an

area

where are vitality is much less than

urban

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in urban

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space.

Moreover

, they can increase

rate

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the rate

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of employment opportunities and get better

career

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because

in

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the

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apply

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most of

vilages

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villages

are unemployment due to those dependent on

agricutural

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agricultural

. Another

advantages

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is that transport expenses will

be reduce

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because industries will be set up the

vilages

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villages

,

this

leads to the raw materials used in industrial activity and that not be transferred to the city. As

consequently

,

this

will help workers save a lot of time and money.

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, it

aslo

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also

has

negative

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a negative

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face, if the number

go

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up to the limit, means that

rate

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of

dence

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dense

descent

population and traffic congestion will be upsurge rapidly. Lead to traffic jam and

enviromental

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environmental

pollution become

great

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a great

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problem for rural

area

.

However

, those negative can be stability

controled

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control

controlled

. In conclusion, the merits seem to

be outweigh

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the drawbacks as

it

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they

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can benefit the companies themselves

such

as

reduce

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reducing

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spending in life and soaring job

opportunity

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opportunities

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.

However

, factories may face to

polute

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pollute

enviroment

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environment

like release gas emission into the air. Given

this

situation, I

thinks

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that government should balance the location of the resident living in two

area

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areas

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.