Today, more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficlult, such as the Sahara Desert or the Antartica. What are benefits or disadvantages for tourists visiting such places?
Now a days
, People have a plethora of options to travel for vacations but it gets weirder when they are attempting to go to the places where the atmosphere is extreme Correct the word
Nowadays
such
as Sahara
Desert which is too hot and Correct article usage
the Sahara
Antartica
which has shivering cold breezes. Correct your spelling
Antarctica
However
, this
has both the advantage such
as making memories and also
disadvantage like injuries.
To begin
with, the first
major merit of going there is to build memories for the future ages. Moreover
, these trips are what that cherished in later times. Further
, it also
builds self-confidence of being able to survive in such
harsh weathers
. Fix the agreement mistake
weather
As a result
, it keeps humans motivated to achieve many significant goals as they would be knowing their capabilities. However
, immense care has to be taken in order to be safe during such
activities. For instance, a group of students travelled to Shimla which had the toughest path to go to. Yet, they did it due to the fact that they love such
trips. Even after 3 years
they make happy conversations about it.
Add a comma
,years
On the other hand
, there are plethora
of possibilities of facing situations Add an article
a plethora
which
are Correct pronoun usage
that
harzardous
that could be Correct your spelling
hazardous
life threatening
. Add a hyphen
life-threatening
Firstly
, proper preparation has to be done even before the actual journey where they need to be mentally efficient during deadly scenarios and not take any wrong decisions. Secondly
, they also
need to be physically fit in order to run swiftly if needed during wild animal encounters. Thereafter
, they must have significant knowledge about location
they go so that they can anticipate things well Add an article
the location
further
. To illustrate it, Mitchel a hiker climbed to the top of mount
Everest whose path is extremely horrible. A common man would not be able to do it. Change the capitalization
Mount
However
, he did it owning to the fact that he developed himself to be capable of doing it for quite a while.
In summary, no matter how harsh the journey and destination is
people are always Change the verb form
are
immensly
interested in them. Correct your spelling
immensely
intensely
However
, this
ultimately has best
outputs when done with extreme caution. If not, there would be consequences that would be Correct article usage
the best
regreted
.Correct your spelling
regretted
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...