With a great variety of social networking websites, people often add complete strangers to their friend lists. Do you think that this tendency helps people to find new friends or is it just a mean to increase their self-esteem? Justify your opinion with relevant examples. Write at least 250 words.
Nowadays that social networking is developing, generally speaking,
people
are getting used to accepting strangers as their friends
in social media. Some people
say that this
act is useful to find new friends
but some other
claim that Fix the agreement mistake
others
it's
only purpose is to increase their dignity. In my experience, Correct your spelling
its
social
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a social
network
is a place for all purposes but it's mostly used to help people
connect with more people
rather than helping them feel better about themselves.
First
of all, all of the old and new friends
were one day a stranger to all of us. As the social network
world is growing bigger and bigger people
start being less paranoid about choosing who
to add to their Change the pronoun
whom
friends
list. Change to a genitive case
friend's
friends'
Social
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A social
The social
network
can be used to make new Fix the agreement mistake
networks
friends
much easier with different people
and opinions.
I believe that,
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apply
social
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the social
network
doesn't have limit for the location you are using it and you're able to connect with anyone around the whole world without any problem. Adding friends
in
your social media account is not only for finding Change preposition
to
friends
. Apart from increasing the number
of your friends
, it helps you learn different cultures and languages, can be used to help you with your work and studies, and so many other stuff. Moreover
, it helps you be able to discuss your concerns with somebody else across the world with the same position as you. For example
, if you're a person in the UK, you can still easily have a good chat with a great student in California with the same goals and aims as you, and you can share your thoughts and pathways.
However
on
the other hand, self-esteem is a concept that you can't directly relate Add the comma(s)
,on
it
to only the Correct pronoun usage
apply
number
of friends
on the internet. The number
of your friends
can increase by just accepting strangers follow
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following
request
, but to actually being able to talk to them and increase the circle of your Fix the agreement mistake
requests
friends
. For instance
, you can have more than ten thousand friend
on a social media application like Facebook, but when it comes to talking and hanging out you have no one; in Change to a plural noun
friends
this
case
the Add a comma
,case
number
of your friends
doesn't help you have more confidence.
On the whole, almost everyone use
social Change the verb form
uses
network
nowadays, the difference is some people
use
it to find new people
, some others may use
it to boost their self-esteem, and many others may use
it for various other purposes; but mostly, it is used to connect with other people
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