The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

Development in any sector is taken optimistically.
However
, some believe that purchasing on various online platforms is a threat to the local vendors as it may result in the closure of shops. But I do not accord with
this
notion and will take both as different aspects. There are many individuals, who do not have any idea about accessing e-commerce applications, due to illiteracy and lack of knowledge. Take labour class as an example, in India, blue-collar job
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afraid to access gadgets. They merely want to follow an easy approach,
also
they are hired on
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system, which limits their budget somehow.
Moreover
, shops in locality always provide
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stock of eatables
such
as fruits and vegetables. Many elderly people do not want to change their routine of going on
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and buying useful products.
This
outing freshens their mind and
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them connect with society, even after their retirement.
On the other hand
, online purchasing is majorly done by
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working class, as they are busy while earning disposable incomes and have made their work a priority.
For instance
, after the shift of eight hours and overtime, a person will only relax
instead
of shopping.
Furthermore
, these websites provide
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of benefits including fashion trends, different ways to pay and doorstep delivery. These all services attract youth towards them. To conclude, growth can only lead to success rather than depletion. It is
also
true for shopping either online or from local ventures. The importance of domestic business on small scale will never fade away, as per my perception.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar
  • physical stores
  • online retailers
  • retail apocalypse
  • digital economy
  • consumer behavior
  • sustainability
  • commercial landscape
  • high-street
  • consumer trends
  • augmented reality
  • showrooms
  • carbon footprint
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