Several languages are in danger of extinction because they are spoken by very small numbers of people. Some people say that governments should spend public money on saving these languages, while others believe that would be a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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vital part of our life and we are using different
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languages
in every country. Several
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languages
are
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threaten
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of extinction because
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small
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a small
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group of
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are using these languages.
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,some communities have
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the opinion
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that
government
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have to apply
pargmatic
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pragmatic
policies and spend money to save them.
On the other hand
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,some
people
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believe that would be
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a waste
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of money.In
this
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essay , we can discuss
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both views and
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bring
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our own opinion. Languages are evolving
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past
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the past
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long years and
still
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it is in
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stage.There are some reasons behind why
people
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believe
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belive
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believe
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that some
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languages
are in danger and
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government
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the government
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should spend money to save them.
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and foremost , each
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is consist of rich history and our old vernacular has
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role to maintain our tradition and culture.
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, some
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groups
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of
people
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such
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as
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, old age
people
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, and
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a few
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communities have their own
language
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.
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, if any disaster
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for their
language
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it
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would
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effect
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these communities
also
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.
Therfore
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, some population thinks that
government
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has
authority
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to protect them from extinction from their own state.
However
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, languages are still in their growing stage and we can expect some more changes in our current vernacular. To be precise,
this
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is the time of
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globalisation
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, so we cannot stick in
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our
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mother tongue and it is
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requirement
requrement
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a requrement
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to learn
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language
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a language
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which more
people
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are using for communication.
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, symbols and signs were our communication
language
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in ancient
time
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times
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and it is developed and
reach
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reached
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on
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this
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stage what we are seeing now.It is
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accepted truth.
Furthermore
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, some
people
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thinks
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that
government
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fund should
be spend
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be spent
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for some other social activities and development .If we are focusing on
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the protection
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of
such
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language
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would not give any fair result. To conclude,
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even though
,
language
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has
crucial
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role in our life , we should accept the truth of evolving. For
this
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reason ,
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do
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don
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do
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not believe to spend
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funds
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by
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government
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the government
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to
protet
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protect
language
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.
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