You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - explain why you want to work in the company's head office for six months - say how your work could be done while you are away - ask for his/her help in arranging it

Dear Stuart, I would like to request to work from Singapore for two quarters as I have been apart
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my husband
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2 years. As far as I am working at RMA for 3 years as Head of HR in Myanmar, you may see my continuous effort and
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to
RMA
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MM
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. I trust my
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that they definitely perform with my remote management while I am in there. Meanwhile the delegation to my senior staff for some of the functions as well as weekly by
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meetings with line managers
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going to start preparing the process. Once I got the approval from you, I will start handover face-to-face discussions and bank signatory to my
team
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am away from
Myanmar
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office.
Additionally
, I may need your valuable invitation letter and recommendation to
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business visa and salary offshore payment during six month period. Happy to get your
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and looking forward to hearing from you for
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approval
. Yours faithfully, Honey Linn
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional advancement
  • cross-cultural collaboration
  • headquarters/ head office
  • global perspective
  • remote work
  • temporary assignment
  • team dynamics
  • networking opportunities
  • cultural immersion
  • succession planning
  • collaborative tools
  • time zone coordination
  • corporate hierarchy
  • relocation logistics
  • work-life balance
  • multinational environment
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