Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some people believe that
university
students
should choose only futuristic subjects
such
as technology and science for their job, others claim that they should choose whatever they like. Both of the approximations can be meaningful to some aspects, yet, I strongly believe that university
students
should choose their study
subjects
according to their field of interests
.
Studying Fix the agreement mistake
interest
on
the field of their interests gain Change preposition
in
university
students
creativity and productivity. Their studies will expand and be deeper because of intense
curiosity Correct pronoun usage
their intense
to
their Change preposition
about
university
subjects
. They will investigate their study
subjects
with passion, thus
produce
valuable knowledge. Wrong verb form
producing
Besides
, studying on the ones interest’s will be satisfying. On the other hand
, the aspect of
that Change preposition
apply
university
students
should only study
subjects
which related to the future is another point of view. In parallel to this
perspective, so many university
students
have been directed to study
science and technology. Indeed, today’s one of the most popular study
subject
at Change to a plural noun
subjects
the
universities is artificial intelligence and machine learning. Many universities have opened new faculties, Correct article usage
apply
therefore
students
who are eager to learn and talented in these fields, have chance
to prefer these scientific and technologic fields.
If Correct article usage
a chance
university
students
have been forced to study
the only subjects
which related the future, there may occur lack of information regarding to
todays’ Remove the preposition
apply
subjects
. To do like this
would be dangerous for humanity because we need not only future necessities but also
solution
for today’s problems. Fix the agreement mistake
solutions
Besides
, humanity does not need only technology but needs everything such
as art, literature, music, medicine and so on to survive and develop. In conclusion, students
should choose their university
study
subject as they wish to be happy, satisfy
, beneficial to society.Wrong verb form
satisfied
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