Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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Some people believe that
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students
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should choose only futuristic
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such
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as technology and science for their job, others claim that they should choose whatever they like. Both of the approximations can be meaningful to some aspects, yet, I strongly believe that
university
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students
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should choose their
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subjects
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according to their field of
interests
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. Studying
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the field of their interests gain
university
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students
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creativity and productivity. Their studies will expand and be deeper because of
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curiosity
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their
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subjects
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. They will investigate their
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with passion,
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produce
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valuable knowledge.
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, studying on the ones interest’s will be satisfying.
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, the aspect
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that
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students
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should only
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subjects
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which related to the future is another point of view. In parallel to
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perspective, so many
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students
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have been directed to
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science and technology. Indeed, today’s one of the most popular
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subject
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at
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universities is artificial intelligence and machine learning. Many universities have opened new faculties,
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students
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who are eager to learn and talented in these fields, have
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to prefer these scientific and technologic fields. If
university
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students
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have been forced to
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the only
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which related the future, there may occur lack of information regarding
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todays’
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. To do like
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would be dangerous for humanity because we need not only future necessities but
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solution
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for today’s problems.
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, humanity does not need only technology but needs everything
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as art, literature, music, medicine and so on to survive and develop. In conclusion,
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should choose their
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study
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subject as they wish to be happy,
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, beneficial to society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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