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The two graphs show information about dwelling
prices
in
England
and
London
,
additionally
, make a comparison in terms of average
costs
of housing between some regions in
England
in 2013. At a glance, there was a significant rise in
costs
of houses in 2013, compared to 1995. Noticeably,
London
was the top region to have the highest
prices
for housing. Contrarily, North East was one of the two areas to have the incredibly cheapest
costs
.
First
of all, in the
first
chart, it could be clearly seen that in 1995,
England
had unnoticeable dwelling
prices
which were just 125000
pounds
on average, comparing
this
to
London
, there was not a dramatic difference in housing
costs
between the two areas - where
London
was only 75000
pounds
higher than
England
. But things had changed, eighteen years later,
London
wildly doubled its housing
costs
to over 425000
pounds
in 2013. At that time,
England
' average
costs
were significantly lower than its capital city - nearly 225000
pounds
in comparison. Nextly, in the
second
graph,
London
remained to be the top area to have the highest dwelling
costs
. The other top four which was South East, South West. North West to have their house
prices
around 200000 to maximumly over 300000
pounds
. Contrary to others, North East was in the bottom place where it had incredibly affordable
prices
of housing with only 10000
pounds
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumerism
  • economic growth
  • environmental impact
  • resource depletion
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • technological advancement
  • quality of life
  • social status
  • societal pressure
  • financial stress
  • social inequality
  • sustainability
  • responsible consumption
  • recycling
  • upcycling
  • second-hand
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