Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?

11. Describe a time when you waited for something special that would happen. There are a few events in my life where I was waiting for something special but never lost my patients. That’s the reason why I enjoyed it the most when I achieved that thing. I was waiting to get into college. It might not be special to many but it was to me. I did my high schooling in Korea, but before I graduate from

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school, I went to China to attend

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University. I thought that it will be helpful for me to study in the biggest country in Asia

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because I always wanted to pursue my career in

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exam was extremely difficult for me, and there was no friend around me as I didn’t attend a regular school. Getting into college was special for me because I realised I will get enough time to make new friends

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have fewer restrictions, and I can study the subject which I really like. So I thought going to college will give me a little freedom and I can do things that I love. On the result announcement day, there was some problem

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the website, so the result was delayed. During that period I was in the private institute with my teacher and I was really nervous.

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website and saw my name on the successful candidate list. I was really happy that I made my choice and I never