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Because many children are not able to learn foreign languages, schools should not force them to learn foreign languages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There are many educational institutes compel
students
 to learn foreign
languages
 to make them multiple
language
speaker
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 and help them to defeat their competitors in the future. Certainly, as the world is becoming a global village, and the significance of global
languages
 is becoming greater, it becomes the need of
students
 to learn
such
languages
, but I strongly agree with the statement that a child shall not be compelled to study
foreign
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language
, especially when they are too young.
Firstly
, the introduction of an international
language
 into the school module can create confusion for the
children
. Since
children
 can be unaware of the basics of their courses, we should provide the lessons in a single
language
, especially with their mother tongue.
Conversely
, if we introduce a different
language
 lesson for them at
their
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 early age, it will confuse them in choosing which
language
 to adopt.
For example
, in
the
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kindergarten, the teachers use Korean to educate kids about Korean alphabets, pronunciations and basic words,
however
, if they
also
 start to teach them English along with Korean, the young
children
 would probably begin facing difficulties in studies.
Besides
, I oppose those schools’ move to force
children
learn
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 foreign
languages
 because many
students
 do not have any interest in learning new
languages
. When a
language
 is taught in
such
 a situation,
students
 would not be active in their learning, and the lesson brings unsatisfactory results.
Moreover
, in most schools
which
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 teach foreign
languages
, there would not be native teachers to teach the
languages
, and
this
 would
also
 bring ineffective and inappropriate teaching. To conclude, though learning other
languages
 can be meaningful and helpful for
children
’s future, in my perception, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages, it is not reasonable to
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children
 to learn
foreign
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language
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school.
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