You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it

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Dear Amanda, It was announced a campaign for capability enhancement on business skills

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as enterprise risk management and problem-solving. Some employees around the world will be selected to spend 6 months on company's head in London.

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is a great opportunity for my development and I believe

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will enable increase my performance, resulting in a huge contribution to achieving the department's goals of delivering the projects faster and with lower costs. During these six months, there will be some workshops with experts and opportunities to shadow senior leaders. It will be taken part-time, so I will have the other part-time free to continuos the work I've been doing.

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, Mike can support me with some administrative activities that do not need my direct efforts. The selection for the program will start at the end of

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month, only managers can subscribe employees for selection. I really appreciate it if you could support me on

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initiative, indicating me and trusting in my potential for developing the skills required to contribute to the department's performance. I hope to hear from you soon. Kind regards Evelyn

evewilkensMon Oct 25 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

187 words

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