The maps below show changes that took place in Youngsville in New Zealand over a 25-year period from 1980 to 2005.
The maps illustrate shifts
taken
place in Youngsville in New Zealand during a 25-year period first in 1980 Wrong verb form
that took
then
in 2005. Correct word choice
and then
One
noticeable thing that should be mentioned is that a
woodland of a town was cut down for facility needs. In 1980, the town was divided into two landscapes connected by a bridge. The northern side was majorly occupied by trees and there was a small river for swimming and fishing at the centre of it. That zone had Correct article usage
the
also
a hospital and living buildings close to the sea.With regards to the lower area, it was mainly taken by transport delivering constructions and accommodation. They are an airport, a railway station and a school. The same as higher
Correct article usage
the higher
one
, trees and cottages were there. However
, the beach area was fully engaged by the railway station. In 2005, initial
dwellings’ space located in the north part of the township was Correct article usage
the initial
concerned
by a stadium and a parking area. Verb problem
covered
Moreover
, the second one
of the latter was placed near the river, which was added by an
another activity named canoe and golf in the western part of it. In terms of the southern portion, there is everything floral was replaced by buildings Remove the article
apply
such
as skyscrapers, a warehouse, factories and one
more parking zone. The railway station was continued through and supplemented the second connection between the two grounds. 17:49 Reply Edit Copy Selected Text Pin Forward Select DeleteSubmitted by zaukenkhazhy on
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