Many people believe that it's better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era, collaborating study is a new teaching method, where students can share their ideas with
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of people and
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level of difficult topics and communication ability. I partially agree with
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notion. In, the forthcoming essay, I will articulate some pros and cons of
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method.
To begin
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is that
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because it is helped pupils to understand harder subjects like
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math and science. During working with
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, they can express their problems and ideas with each other, When one person helped the other person they can easily
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to
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method because they
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to
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class or age.
Moreover
, they
also
need to
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their communication skill
thus
, without knowing how to express their thoughts, opinions information of others.
As a result
, they will be more expressive and
also
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.
However
,
on the other hand
, there are a couple of drawbacks of team schooling.
Firstly
, the people who are
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lost their voice,
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.
As a result
, they cannot
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with other members as well as other individuals do not provide any support so that, they feel abandoned and
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lower self- steam.
Secondly
, if there
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no response person who
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students works
therefore
that, sometimes they lost their right track. To conclude, in my point of , group learning has
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impact on students life because of that they can
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some skills which will give some benefits in the near future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collaborative environment
  • discussion
  • debate
  • exchange of ideas
  • critical soft skills
  • communication
  • teamwork
  • leadership
  • emotional and motivational support
  • isolating
  • personalized pace
  • efficient learning
  • self-discipline
  • accountability
  • educational progress
  • distractions
  • group dynamics
  • commitment
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