some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools, others however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Either mixed

schools

or single

schools

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a hotly-debated topic that often

divide

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opinion.

Nevertheless

,some say it is of preference to educate boys and girls in distinct

schools

while it is imperative taking part in mixed

schools

.I will el

aborate

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elaborate

on both

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and accord my opinion.

First

of all, separate

schools

offer

students

an opportunity to compete with each other

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the same

sex

,which

make

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learning more competitive ,

moreover

,

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self confidence

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.

In

addition

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there is no

distraction

from other

sex

which is indispensable for the

students

to concentrate and perform excellently in

schools

.Research has found that

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Rwanda, where all

schools

are separate is most visited by multiple countries for benchmarking because of

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perfomance

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performance

of

schools

.

On the other

hand

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sepate

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separate

schools

students

less understand the world

such

that when they finish school, they are the most who go astray because they are not exposed.

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there is no

distraction

and

competation

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competition

among

same

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same-sex

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sex

is well established

Secondly

,mixed

schools

have merit and

dimerits

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demerits

.Sexual

distraction

is

such

a drawback in mixed

schools

such

that it probably end up developing into a relationship among

students

which deter the

perfomance

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performance

of the

students

however

inspite

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in spite

of

this

there is an opportunity to socialized as it

facilitate

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student be at a position to tackle life outside world

unlike

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others .

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,bullying is

also

very common in mixed

schools

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to

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the

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shy

students

.

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,

competation

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competition

is at

top

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norch

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noarch

as in which

sex

will be leading the class

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performance

such

that every

students

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will be on toes to get better marks. For

this

reason

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the dismay of

perfomimg

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performing

unsuccessfully is high in

mixed

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school. To conclude,

schools

is an environment for learning and

improve

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skill

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but all distracters should be controlled by the

mananagement

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management

.

However

, separate

school

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schools

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give an opportunity for a student to concentrate fully without

distraction

from

outside

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world.