You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter- -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work - say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter to show my exasperation with the Logitech webcam ( model number - C767D) which I purchased from your shop a month ago. Owing to the restrictions imposed by the ruling government regarding staff attendance on organisations due to

pandemic

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, I am entitled to work from home.

That is

why

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I ordered a high

defination

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definition

and active noise cancellation web camera from your shop to deal with my clients from my abode.

However

, after working smoothly for around 30 days, it stopped streaming and went unresponsive. In order to encounter the issue, I tried to follow some

troubleshoot

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steps mentioned in the manual given with

this

product but it all went in vain.

This

technical issue is costing me and my company the clients as I am unable to attend

them

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and meet their requirements,

thus

, even getting warned from my manager about termination of my job if not resolved rapidly. So, It would be helpful if you send a technician on immediate purpose or replace it with another desired equipment because the

defected

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piece is in warranty. I hope you could pay heed to my suggestions and may solve the issue

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priority

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manner. Yours faithfully, Abhishek Jindal.

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