You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter- -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work - say what you want the shop or company to do

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to show my exasperation with the Logitech webcam ( model number - C767D) which I purchased from your shop a month ago. Owing to the restrictions imposed by the ruling government regarding staff attendance on organisations due to

pandemic

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, I am entitled to work from home.

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why

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I ordered a high

defination

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definition

and active noise cancellation web camera from your shop to deal with my clients from my abode.

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, after working smoothly for around 30 days, it stopped streaming and went unresponsive. In order to encounter the issue, I tried to follow some

troubleshoot

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steps mentioned in the manual given with

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product but it all went in vain.

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technical issue is costing me and my company the clients as I am unable to attend

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and meet their requirements,

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, even getting warned from my manager about termination of my job if not resolved rapidly. So, It would be helpful if you send a technician on immediate purpose or replace it with another desired equipment because the

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piece is in warranty. I hope you could pay heed to my suggestions and may solve the issue

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priority

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manner. Yours faithfully, Abhishek Jindal.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

205 words

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