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Radio and television audience in Uk, October- December 1992

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The graph shows the percentage of people in the UK who listen to the radio and watch television throughout the day from October to December in the year 1992. Overall, it can seem that both audiences show significant variation in the graph. More audience is likely to listen to the radio in the morning whereas there is a range showing a high upward trend in television.
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, the latter starts from 0% , it rises eventually and reaches its lowest point between 11 am to 12 pm. At the same time, radio listeners display just below one-tenth. It dramatically takes a surge until it reaches its peak at just under a
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 It continues to fall steadily through the day. In the meantime, the percentage of television audiences grows abruptly and hit its spike at 8 pm and decline suddenly and hit its most depressing point. Surprisingly, it is the mark where the two rates meet and the
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 day begins again.
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