In some countries fast food restaurants and supermarkets give money to schools to promote their products. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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well recently we can see that
this
is a trend basic of people most of the
restuarents
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restaurants
and bakes and supermarkets is give money to
scools
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schools
and collages for
promote
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their product in my view
this
is a positive development
firstly
,
students
will get more benefits through
this
promote
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for
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example,
students
gets
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more
experice
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experience
through
bussiness
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business
and ad purpose some
students
may become more famous through
this
ad and
also
they can explore more different types of foods and products
secondly
, those merchants or
company
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companies
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will get more profit through by
this
programe
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programme
program
for instance
,people will know about the product or restaurants or supermarket because it like
a
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an
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advatisement
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advertisement
some thing
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something
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like cheap
advatisement
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advertisement
through
this
they can save a lot of money by adding a celebrates or a famous artist something like that through
this
program they can earn more profit in future
also
and
finally
, some management or parents may cause some issue behind
this
method because their
veiws
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views
is its school or a collage
not
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a market place its for study purpose they would offence like that to sum
up
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it is more benefits for those hotels and supermarkets and
also
students
but some
may
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maybe
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be not consider
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as good anyway in my view
iam
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I am
still
belive
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believe
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that
its
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a
possitive
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positive
thing
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