You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take

Dear Manager, I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention to the central AC system which was not working properly during my stay.
Last
month I stayed in your hotel for a week and I placed a special request for a room with
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sea view. The room was indeed nice with a
beutiful
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beautiful
view outside.
Nevertheless
, I am really disappointed with your cooling system being in a
5 star
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hotel. My entire stay had been spoiled due to the hot weather which was quite
unexcpected
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unexpected
in
the
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January month.
Moreover
, your cooling
sytem
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system
was not helping me to get over the problem. The vent sound feels like it is working but it was not making the room cool. I tried to ask your team but for some
reason
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they
couldnt
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couldn't
repair it. Since I paid in advance and
couldnt
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couldn't
move anywhere else, I had to buy a table fan for the time being as they
couldnt
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couldn't
provide me
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one. I would like you to check with your maintenance team and keep it working
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whole
years
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regardless
which
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season it is. I hope my feedback helps
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your services. Thank You. Yours faithfully,
Brijal
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Bridal
Brinjal
Desai
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