You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of year and the heating / cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter: give details of what went wrong explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at the time say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Manager,
I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention to the central AC system which was not working properly during my stay.
Last
month I stayed in your hotel for a week and I placed a special request for a room with the
sea view. The room was indeed nice with a Correct article usage
a
beutiful
view outside. Correct your spelling
beautiful
Nevertheless
, I am really disappointed with your cooling system being in a 5 star
hotel. My entire stay had been spoiled due to the hot weather which was quite Add a hyphen
5-star
unexcpected
in Correct your spelling
unexpected
the
January month. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, your cooling sytem
was not helping me to get over the problem. The vent sound feels like it is working but it was not making the room cool. I tried to ask your team but for some Correct your spelling
system
reason
they Add a comma
,reason
couldnt
repair it. Since I paid in advance and Correct your spelling
couldn't
couldnt
move anywhere else, I had to buy a table fan for the time being as they Correct your spelling
couldn't
couldnt
provide me Correct your spelling
couldn't
the
one. I would like you to check with your maintenance team and keep it working Add the preposition
with the
the
whole Change preposition
for the
years
regardless Fix the agreement mistake
year
which
season it is.
I hope my feedback helps Change preposition
of which
improving
your services.
Thank You.
Yours faithfully,
Wrong verb form
improve
Brijal
DesaiCorrect your spelling
Bridal
Brinjal
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