Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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has made the world
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comfortable
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universal law, some believe that
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undergraduates should allow
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certain
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set of limited subject areas
instead
of their own
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preferences
. There are both negative and positive facts under each category. People tend to believe that
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subject areas like science and technology will be useful in the future.There are some reasons to support
this
stand.
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, there is a massive job market
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the technology field and
this
is one key requirement of any
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undergraduate
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after
completing his degree.
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in Sri
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the demand for
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civil engineers is much higher than
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other field.
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some
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occasions
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the agreements are signed even before the final exam.
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development projects in the country. Pumping young blood
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those
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will
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expedite the progress.
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, the contribution of other
subjects
like art, music, drama, archaeology or languages
also
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a vital role in
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development of the nation. While science and
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technology
brings
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more
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development to the country,
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of
subjects
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the mental well being of a person.
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a student might be ended up in an unrecoverable mental frustration due to not having the opportunity to follow his own dream.There
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cases where students left their course in between study years since those
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meet their mental expectations. In my opinion, a certain number of vacancies should be published under each
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subjects
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.
Then
students can alter their selection and choose another field
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of
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up as a jobless graduate. Meantime the vacancy list should be
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in science
realated
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related
subject areas to
recruite
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recruit
further
students.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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