All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

Weight gain among children and adults is

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common health trouble faced by most of the country’s population.

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issue badly affected all citizens ,especially to child and teenagers. Modern lifestyle and unhealthy

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are the main reasons behind

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and it can be addressed by promoting healthy living patterns. Let’s begin with the cause of the increase in the obesity issue. The modern living standard is the major reason for

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cause.

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is because

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do not have time to do workout and physical workouts.

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, in children’s daily activities, they spend most of their time in front of the TV and playing computer games.

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, consumption of unhealthy

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is another reason for

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complication. The reason behind

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is that children and adults are preferring to eat

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from global chain restaurants.

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, children like

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from KFC and other restaurants rather than home-cooked meals.

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, fortunately, there is a number of solutions available to address

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of all, the government should promote healthy living standards to their citizen by encouraging them for more physical

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can be done by managing more open public spaces to play physical games in cities area. Traditional methods of city planning in Kathmandu can be taken as an example, where a large playground was mandatorily needed to build houses

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so that people can be able to do physical

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. Another method to address

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could be to raise a tax on unhealthy

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. Government should impose high tax rates on unhealthy

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and provide subsidies to healthy

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items.

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method can help to demotivate society to eat fast

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. Take, Switzerland as an example, the authority hike the tax on sugar products, due to that public consume fewer fizzy drinks and they have fewer obesity problems compared with other European countries. All things considered, obesity is not only one country

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but a global

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. People are spending their time by less physical

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and eating more fast

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are the major reasons behind

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, in my view, to address

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government should introduce different plans to motivate more physical

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and healthy

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to their citizens.