A big salary is more important while choosing a job. Do you agree or disagree?

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high

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play a vital role when folks select their career. I partially agree with

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the forthcoming essay, I will articulate some reasons regarding

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statement.

First

of all, I believe that being

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human we have some responsibilities for our family

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so that only money can help

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it. To achieve

this

goal every employee working hard to meet

this

target despite

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lots of

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situations they had to

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in daily life.

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years

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a survey has been conducted to see the ratio of employees who work with satisfaction and they found only 25% but

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of them are unsatisfied because they just do

this

simply

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duties.

On the other hand

, if people choose according to their interest one’s that keep them motivated and

also

accelerated their career. In

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, it is undeniable truth when a person works with interest that improves

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of work as well as there

are

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higher chance to reach

good

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position within

short

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amount of time.

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, the famous author Mike he

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his high paid job

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wants to be a

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but after seeing ups and downs now he became a famous and most worthy author in twenty centuries. To conclude, money is important to fulfil our daily necessities and need but doing work without satisfaction people

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at the end of the day.