You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

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Robertson, Good day, I am Anya, living here in New Zealand. I am writing

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letter regarding the job that I saw in the magazine which I am very interested to apply

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the job is still available. I am

traveling

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there

week and it will be a big help for me to save at the same time earn while staying there. It is not a problem to take care of your kid since I used to take care of my siblings before,

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I love kids.

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and responsible person that you can rely on. I graduated as

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here,

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background to handle your child. I

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know how to do household chores which I think I can use while staying there.

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, during my free time I am asking for your permission to allow me to fix my papers for my application in Canada,

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processing of my papers, it will not affect my obligation in our contract. I hope for your response and consider my plan if you will hire me. It will be a big help for me, and I promise to do my best at work. Thank you in advance. Yours sincerely, Anya

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Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
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