You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter- -describe the problem with the equipment -explain how this problem is affecting your work - say what you want the shop or company to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you to let you know about misfunction of my laptop which I bought
last
month from your shop. It is a Dell product with 100GB ROM and 1.25Hz RAM. The machine is not running smoothly and takes much time to respond to instructions. Because of
this
issue, my office work takes much time to be done. It raises questions about my abilities and dedication, which affect my job reputation
also
. I would be grateful if you send someone to look after
this
problem.
Besides
I want to remind you as a policy of buying a product from your store I have the right of asking your services for the one year as a warranty card issued by your manager.
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faithfully Asma
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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