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Psychologists have known for many years that colour can affect how people feel. For this reason, attention should be given to colour schemes when decorating places such as offices and hospitals. How true this statement? How far colours influence people’s health and capacity for work?

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common sense that
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 have a huge impact on
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's moods and places
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 as work and healthcare could change drastically how
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 feel just by the
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 on the walls. The following paragraphs will explain why
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 is true and how
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 could modify
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's experiences.
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 of all, there are
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 researchers around the world that prove the influence of
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 in our lives.
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 the perception of
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 is very singular and has
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 on age, gender and culture, some hues have the common sense of their psychological effect on us.
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,
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 hue usually is associated with passion and love but
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 associated with anger, blood and pain.
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, red
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is not the best choice to paint walls in offices or hospitals because
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 kind of feeling could make
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 feel unproductive or
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.
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, the right choice of
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 could improve creativity, happiness and focus. Places that require concentration needs to consider
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 as an essential part to increase productivity.
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, patients in the hospitals will benefit as well because some
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 improve our mood.
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,
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 like blue and green are always associated with calm and wellness. These
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 are associated with the
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 we have in nature and will help those
people
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 who work in stressful environments to feel more relaxed and calm, even though the work is stressful.
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,
colours
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 can neutralize some unpleasant feelings we could experience in stressful places, like offices and hospitals. To conclude, I wholeheartedly believe that
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 can change our feelings and after
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 we already know how
colours
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 affect us.
People
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 could feel less stress in some stressful environments and
colours
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 could help to neutralize those effects on us.
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