Animal species are becoming extinct as a result of human activities on land and in sea. Why has this happened? What’s the solution? It is undeniable that many terrestrial and marine animals are now in danger of extinction because of human activities. Various factors have brought about this situation, and solutions must be found and implemented urgently.

There are several reasons why

animals

are now dying out. The main reason is that people kill

animals

for food and fur. In fact, lots of

animals

are killed for economic be

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such

as elephants with their ivory. The other cause is the pollution from human beings.

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, factories discharge toxic waste into the river, beach and

this

leads to the death of many aquatic

animals

.

Last

but not least, deforestation, people cutting down forests to build houses.

This

causes lots of

animals

to lose their homes and have no place to live. Many measures should be taken by the government to tackle the disappearance of animal species.

To begin

with,

firstly

, the government should release strict laws to prevent poaching. It means that severe penalties for animal hunting cases will be conducted to ensure the safety of terrestrial and aquatic

animals

. Be

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the other way is to bring rare

animals

to the zoo to raise and create more wildlife reserves.

This

solution would help us preserve the breed of rare

animals

and protect

animals

from dangers.

Finally

, au

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hould create many captive breeding programmes. By doing

this

, we could let people know about the urgent problem of wildlife and things to do to prevent th

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tinction. In conclusion, there are main contributors to the extinction of

animals

on land and in se

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and several measures are suggested to the authority to put an end to the situation