with divorce rates and family breakdowns increasing globally, it is generally accepted families today are not as close as they used to. Discuse the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The 50 past years have seen a
worlwide
Correct your spelling
worldwide

The word worlwide is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

increase
family
Change preposition
in family

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

show examples
breakdown and the level of
divorcation
Correct your spelling
divarication

The word divorcation is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

. It is
Correct your spelling
undeniable

The word undenalble is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

undenalble
Correct article usage
an undenalble

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

show examples
fact that families ties are not
intimacy
Replace the word
intimate

The word intimacy doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

show examples
as in the past.
This
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

essey
Correct your spelling
essay

The word essey is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

will
exmaine
Correct your spelling
examine

The word exmaine is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

the main causes of family breakdown and possible
solution
Fix the agreement mistake
solutions

It seems that solution may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

show examples
fo
Correct your spelling
for

The word fo doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

show examples
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

problem. The two main causes of breaking up
Add an article
the relationship
a relationship
show examples
Add an article
the relationship
a relationship

The noun phrase relationship seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

show examples
relationship
Fix the agreement mistake
relationships
show examples
in society are the
overcounsumption
Correct your spelling
overconsumption

The word overcounsumption is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

the social networks and
soaring
Correct article usage
the soaring

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

show examples
generation
gap
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

in public. High usage of
Correct pronoun usage
apply

It seems that there is a pronoun problem here.

show examples
he
Correct your spelling
the

The word he doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

show examples
social
netwoking
Correct your spelling
networking

The word netwoking is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

and
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
internet
Correct article usage
the internet

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

show examples
are responsible for isolating interpersonal
relationshipe
Correct your spelling
relationship
relationships

The word relationshipe is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

as
introverted
Add an article
an introverted

The noun phrase introverted person seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

show examples
person.
For instance
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, the
Correct your spelling
child's
child
Correct your spelling
child's
child

The word childs is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

childs
Correct your spelling
children
show examples
spend a
nermouse
Correct your spelling
nervous

The word nermouse is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

time on the
internet
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

and social network.
therfore
Correct your spelling
therefore

The word therfore is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

, they do not attend in their family rather than in the past. Due to modern
lifystyle
Correct your spelling
lifestyle

The word lifystyle is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

, the
gap
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

genetration
Correct your spelling
generation

The word genetration is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

between child and parent
are
Change the verb form
is

The verb are does not seem to agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.

show examples
increased.
Correct your spelling
Therefore
show examples
Correct your spelling
Therefore

The word Therefor doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

show examples
Therefor
Correct your spelling
Therefore
show examples
, They can not see eye to eye
each
Change preposition
with each

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

show examples
others
Change to a singular noun
other

The singular quantifier each is followed by the plural noun others. Consider changing the noun to the singular or using a different quantifier.

show examples
. In other
Correct your spelling
words
show examples
Correct your spelling
words

The word worlds doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

show examples
worlds
Correct your spelling
words
show examples
,
scoial
Correct your spelling
social

The word scoial is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

network and
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
internet
Correct article usage
the internet

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

show examples
has
Change the verb form
have

It appears that the singular verb has does not agree with the plural compound subject scoial network and internet. Consider changing the verb to the plural form.

show examples
a negative influence on the youngest people who miss their
scioal
Correct your spelling
school
special
social

The word scioal is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

skillsets. Some possible solutions for
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

problem are
contianting
Correct your spelling
continuing
containing

The word contianting is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

intenet
Correct your spelling
internet

The word intenet is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

usage in
family
Add an article
a family

The noun phrase family gathering seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

show examples
gathering and sharing more
commen
Correct your spelling
common

The word commen is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

interest in families.
Childeren
Correct your spelling
Children

The word Childeren is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

must obey
a
Correct article usage
apply

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

show examples
strict
groung
Correct your spelling
ground

The word groung is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

rules for
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
Internet
Add an article
the Internet

The noun phrase Internet seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

show examples
.
however
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, in developed countries use of
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
internet
Correct article usage
the internet

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

show examples
an
Correct your spelling
and

The word an doesn’t seem to fit this context. Consider replacing it with a different one.

show examples
its content are
stricted
Correct your spelling
restricted

The word stricted is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

by
Correct your spelling
government
Correct your spelling
government

The word goverment is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

goverment
Correct article usage
the goverment
show examples
. In
addetion
Correct your spelling
addition

The word addetion is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

, If families shared their interest with their
childeren
Correct your spelling
children

The word childeren is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

, the
gap
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

generation would
disapperaed
Correct your spelling
disappear

The word disapperaed is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

in society.
For example
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, In the past
grandparent
Fix the agreement mistake
grandparents

It seems that grandparent may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.

show examples
handle legend
to
Change preposition
of

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

show examples
their ascends and they have a close
relationshipe
Correct your spelling
relationship

The word relationshipe is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

with each
others
Change to a singular noun
other

The singular quantifier each is followed by the plural noun others. Consider changing the noun to the singular or using a different quantifier.

show examples
. By way of conclusion, The social network and
Use synonyms
Use synonyms
internet
Correct article usage
the internet

It seems that there is an article usage problem here.

show examples
which are used by the
indvisuals
Correct your spelling
individuals
individual

The word indvisuals is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

and generation
gap
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

have an impact on family
relationshipe
Correct your spelling
relationships
relationship

The word relationshipe is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

.
however
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

, we can
promot
Correct your spelling
promote

The word promot is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

these ties by sharing a common and limiting the
internet
Use synonyms

It is important to use synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and use the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score.

in
get
Change the verb form
getting

The verb get may be in the wrong form after the preposition in. Consider changing it to the gerund form.

show examples
to
ghathering
Correct your spelling
gathering

The word ghathering is not in our dictionary. If you’re sure this spelling is correct, you can add it to your personal dictionary to prevent future alerts.

.

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: