All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

In the age of industrialization and modernization, people are finding out more
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advantages
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of
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natural resources,
however
, they are contributing to the destructive activities to the environment. It is recommended that the government ban all
cars
that run
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unrenewable sources of energy, and replace them with electric
cars
. It
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it
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completely an ideal solution to
this
problem.
To begin
with, burning too
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fossil
fuels
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is the main reason behind the increasingly alarming rate of global warming. It accounts for 1/3 the total amount of carbon dioxide that
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released by
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human.
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emission
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for the greenhouse effect which ultimately
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devastating effects on health, because of the dangerous UV-Rays.
Thus
, considering the long term permanent solution, It is advisable to shift towards a better way of transport, which
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not cause air pollution,
such
as electric
cars
! Why?
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, considering alarming air pollution caused by the vehicles in the national capital of India - Delhi,
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government introduce
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scheme to reduce the vehicles on the roads that actually benefited the capital to
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certain extent but the problem still
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. What is more,
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electric engine based
cars
were as powerful as
fuel based
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cars
. Electricity
utilised
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to run
likewise
cars
generated from the renewable sources of electricity like solar and wind energy. Unlike
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cars
, demolish the non-renewable source of energy, whereas electric
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promote the usage of
renewable
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source
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.
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, the Telsa electric car is highly successful within the USA runs through the solar power station, to charge
such
cars
. Simply means that the better and sustainable alternative is available, and
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therefor
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it should be adopted word widely as soon as possible, to restrain from
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further
damage to the environment. In conclusion, I firmly believe that entirely replacing
fossil based
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cars
with electric
cars
decrease carbon footprint and its associated dangerous outcomes and provide the best alternative to utilise
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renewable electricity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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