Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

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in their daily diet are salt and

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. Side effects of salt and

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are like

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heroin. Everyone should reduce

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two materials. Many

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fruits have

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and we should know them and eat them less.

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is cheap and everyone can buy

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amount of it. Our body needs energy for doing everything. A part of

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energy will be achieved by blood glucose levels. We can

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fruit

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of

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. In our country, brown

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is expensive and it has fewer side effects

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with white

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people

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white

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. I think if white

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will be expensive at least half of

people

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do not

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it. They will

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more fruit and it is healthier. I think some

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disagree with my opinion because removing

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of

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their life is very hard for them and they can not

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a life without

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. They

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use

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less

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remove

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it. If somebody

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them a film that shows how

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sugar

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and salt influence the body

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the heart, they absolutely

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use less

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. In conclusion, I think our body needs sugary ingredients, but we can

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many healthy materials

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od

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sugar

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. The best action is

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the price of

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products step by step. So,

people

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buy

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product less and try to test other

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and will see that a life without

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is possible.