Natural resources such as oil, forests, and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does this cause? How can we solve these problems?

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resources
are being consumed in huge
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proportion
proportions
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neccesities
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necessities
our actual world. The
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necessities
of more
resources
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hand
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is because the rate of people that live in the planet , on the other and it is caused by the way that
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that
the
people consumes that every day we spend more than the real
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necessity
.
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we can observe that the
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rim
rhythm
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consuming
goods is increasing by the ones that are used once, and every day
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more industries that work for produce more goods for once use purpose. These industries consume more
resources
and there aren't regulations that take care
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the
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environmental
situation. We can notice many problems of the
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excessive
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exploitation
of
resources
like the lake of
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water
, more
polution
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pollution
in water, air, less natural and green landscapes, etc. Another problem that causes the
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excessive
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exploitation
of natural
resources
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is not only to have
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resoures
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resources
instead
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but
also
, it affects the habitat for some animals one example of
this
es the palm's harvest that affects the gorillas, that have
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less
place to live. The way to resolve these problems
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to be implemented with urgency.
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the
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authorities
should think
in
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harder laws to control the
resources
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explotation
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exploitation
and ask for more
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environmental
compromise;
for example
: ask for more
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recyclable
goood
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good
packages, for every tree
that is
logg
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long
they have to plant ten more, the using of more recycled elements in good's production. Whereas as human
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we can do little steps to help the
enviromental
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environment
too, as
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less
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goods for once time, to recycle more things, to make
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compost for our organic garbage, plant
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some
trees, to join
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enviromental
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environmental
group that
also
helps poor
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communities
to be more friendly with the
enviroment
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environment
, etc. And of course teach our
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children
to live in
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mood with the
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environment
,
becuse
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because
is the place where they live and is for
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a better future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • non-renewable resources
  • economic instability
  • water shortages
  • agricultural production
  • deforestation
  • biodiversity
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • global warming
  • sustainable management
  • conservation
  • alternative energy
  • afforestation
  • reforestation
  • water conservation
  • responsible consumption
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