Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Governments must invest this money in public services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that government funds should not be spent on the arts,

such

as music and plays.

However

, public money should be put on public

services

like health and education. In my viewpoint, I believe that the priority should be on essential public

services

.

Firstly

, it can’t deny that with the unceasing development of economics, the living need of people increase which means the number of people is confronting a number of problems of their routine life, especially public serves. In many countries, these

services

inaccessible

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to the majority of pp of

lower

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classe

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classes

class

. The quality of life would be endangered if

such

services

were not established.

For instance

, if the government does not

focused

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on health care, the country's sickness and death rates would rise.

Furthermore

, if minimal funds are provided to education, economic progress would slow.

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, it is

theduties

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the duties

and

responsibilities

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for

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government to provide funding in these important areas

first

, before focusing on any secondary sector.

On the other hand

, more financing for health care or education,

on the other hand

, does not mean a cut in donations for the arts. There are a lot of kinds of traditional art or music are the important key to open the door to connect every

individuals

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or any

cutral

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control

in the world without

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my own nature. Not only to make friends but

also

it would be the best medician to relax and let

hair

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down after face pressure or suffer

underpress

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underpass

. Another reason is the transport for

next generation

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have more respect about their ancestors. To conclude, there are many advantages to supported in public

services

since it

improve

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people's quality of life.

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Therefor

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, I

cant

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deny that spending money to

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art and creative forms is a waste.