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Today, many educators believe that non-exam subjects such as music, drama, and painting are essential to be taught in schools. Others argue that academic subjects should be given more attention. Do you agree or disagree?

#educators #non-exam #subjects #music #drama #schools #attention
Education is an important part of every person life and they learn different
subjects
 during their student life.
Although
 it is sometimes thought
non academic
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subjects
 are essential to be taught in the school, others believed that should be focused on academic
subjects
. In my opinion, I considered that
children
 can improve many skills by non-exam
subjects
, but academic
subjects
 could not be neglected. There are several reasons why teachers should be taught
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subjects
 to students is that they can know about their hidden
abillities
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abilities
 for
particular
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 field, and they can give the best effort to improve their talent.
For instance
, there are many
televison
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television
 shows related to music and drama, if
children
are already know
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 about songs and tragedy
then
 they have a chance to give the audition.
Therefore
,
childrean
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children
 may have an idea about their skills and they can share about their interested subject. Another point to consider to give the importance to entertainment
subjects
 means students can earn name and fame across the world. so, it is
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proud for the country.
Moreover
,
children
 apply themselves to excel in
thier
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their
the
intreseted
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interested
 subject.
For example
,
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 Monet was not good in academic
subjects
, but he gave the best in painting and had
became
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well-known
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 painter.
Hence
,
subjects
 rather than
academic
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academics
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 are
also
 part of life.
On the other hand
, the importance of academic
subjcets
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subjects
 could not
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. students can not learn about calculation without maths as well as without science can not do any experiment. In
additon
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addition
, history is
also
significant
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 subject to know geography and history of the world. In
conclution
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conclusion
, music, drama and painting are required for
children
's personal development, while for professional growth academic
subjects
 are needed.
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