In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them.sometimes the government has to pay for this care.Who do you think should pay for this care.the government or the family

Britain is

such

an exceptional country that

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old people to reside in homes where

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medical professionals provide

services

to them and occasionally the state clear their bills for them for the

services

offered . It is a hotly debated matter in the community whether it is the

government

or the family that should foot the bills for the

services

offered to them.

Firstly

, it is pivotal to appreciate old

age

since

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biblically

biblical

it is Gods favour and

such

age

group is very venerable. The state should be responsible

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such

age

group

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as their demands are extremely

alot

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a lot

.Their health is comprised

such

that they require frequent

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up

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of occurrence of any disease which requires immediate management.

In addition

, they have worked for the

government

for many years and with

this

, they have been paying taxes.

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, in

USA

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any person at the

age

of 70 years is paid

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kitty every month.

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it is worth considering the

services

they have offered for those many years. Due to

this

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the

government

has a responsibility to protect

this

old generation.

Secondly

, old generations are the mentors to the

youngstars

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youngsters

due to their extreme experience about life.when it comes to historic matters they carry the day.

On the other hand

,they are great

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that the

government

has a responsibility to protect as they are

also

fundamental in

government

matters.

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, in Rwanda

constitution

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this

generation is included in the

government

decision making

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matters as they pray a big role in mentorship

thus

a huge driving force. In conclusion , the environment for

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generation is exceptional and the

government

got a fundamental role in protecting them since it

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fully provide for them without hiccups.