Some countries are struggling with the increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree?

A few countries are facing security's issues which led the

crime

rate

to

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climb

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a consensus

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believes that having more police's force

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the city is the only way to control the

crime

rate

. I completely agree that having forces

distrubated

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distributed

around the

street

would drop the

crime

rate

.

Firstly

, behaviourally speaking,

this

act would make people

to

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be more alert

secondly

, it will

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citizens in that

street

. The main reason why I believe that having agents in the area would

decreace

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decrease

the overall of crimes is

because

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this

would trigger people that there is someone is watching them. In fact,

behavioual

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behavioural

scienctists

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scientists

deduced that when someone knew that

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are watched

this

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them

to

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be more aware.

Moreover

, one of the city's

council

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put a sign that

this

street

is had been watching and there are tons of

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;

as a result

, the

crime

rate

had dropped by %87. Another reason why I think that having the police in the

street

would lower any issue

realted

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related

to security is

because

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it will

sends

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messages to citizens that everything is under control.

Also

,

this

might not

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citizen

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only, but it might

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foreginer

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foreigner

foreigners

who dropped by there. Despite the fact that it will send gleeful messages to the people

this

might be the opposite for the criminals.

Oviously

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Obviously

, when a

crimnal

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criminal

knows that the

minstery

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ministry

mystery

of interior sent agents in the

street

this

might make criminals

to

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have

a

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second guessing

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. In conclusion, I strongly admit that sending police's forces in the area would drop the

crime

rate

this

is because of the watching biases and it will

makes

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a criminal

to

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have

a

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. I do believe that

to have

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more agents in the

street

is not a bad idea.