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Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Learning at the university is different from one to another and the way of studying materials. Each university has a specific standard to follow. In my ,opinion the scholar should choose the subjects want to research. There is a lot of major that requires hardworking work and focus to get succeed, and it is better for the undergraduate to have one specialization. When they study to get knowledge and wise about what they are learning
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 to be an avid reader and have much information about the subject they survey. Undergraduates when they learn particular subjects
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 as mathematics they have myriad Mathematical problems need to analyze and solve when they spend time learning about literature like literary criticism they will not get any benefits, to know about Aristotle and Plato is extremely different info and material content. Each university should change its policy and let the undergraduates choose the subject they want On the other ,hand the freedom of choice make a different mind and create more creative students. The time they spent in one thing they can collect much information and develop and improve themselves unlike who study several subjects they get distracted.
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