The best way to understand other cultures is to work for a multinational organization. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today multinational organizations do business across the
global
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and create employment for many
people
. It is said that working for
such
companies is the best way to understand other
cultures
;
however
, I do not agree with
this
statement. Undoubtedly, working for
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multinational company is beneficial for those who want to enhance their understanding of foreign
cultures
.
First
of all, employees in
an
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multicultural company have opportunities to communicate and work with
people
from different backgrounds, so that they will understand various customs and traditions from a different nation.
Moreover
, given
that
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fact that multinational companies usually set their offices all around the world, their staff will have the chance to take on business trips, and travel to other cities, and even countries.
Therefore
, it is possible for them to experience local
cultures
in person.
However
, I strongly believe that there are a number of alternatives that can help one explore other
cultures
. A good example is
international
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tourism. Travelling overseas has become popular among the public these days. By touring in a different city or
culture
, one are able to communicate with the locals and study local languages, which will strengthen his/ her understanding of
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culture
as well.
Furthermore
,
to learn
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about a different
culture
, enjoying foreign movies and TV drama is efficient and effective too.
In other words
, films and TV programmes are usually produced based on a particular
culture
. For
instant
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, by watching American soap operas,
audience
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are
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exposed to
daily
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lives and conversations of American
people
;
hence
, they can understand how
people
in the USA greet and interact with friends. In conclusion, though multinational companies offer
its
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employees
chance
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of
exposing
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to
different
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culture
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cultures
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, it is not necessarily the best way. One who
want
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exposure to foreign
cultures
can
also
attain
this
goal by travelling
aboard
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and watching TV shows and films made in other counties and cities.
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