Many university graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, should be done about it?

Each year more and more young people are struggling to find their place in the world after graduating. So happens, because graduates are introduced to a completely new environment, to which they were not prepared

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essay, I will try to recite factors that may have caused

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and give my opinion on the situation.

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of all, one of the factors that may have caused

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an outcome, would be the education system in universities, which needs to be modernized. Because of it, university graduates are not prepared for a life outside of

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school,

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it causes difficulties in finding jobs in their chosen profession. The following factor would actually put the students at fault. Nowadays, joining the views of the

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world decades ago, young people tend to go for the jobs that are associated with high pay,

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giving them a higher social status.

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behaviour caused an accelerated need for the same repeating jobs. In my opinion, universities should become more aware

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. They should acquire helpful guides for the students, albeit it is better to do that rather slowly. The reason for

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because young people already have a lot on their plates and any drastic change in their everyday life can cause a rather negative outcome. Regarding the

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possible factor, stated by me earlier, universities and even rather schools should encourage their students to follow their personal and authentic paths, rather than following the crowd.